rain rain

the lets whisper got a good review here

i need to try harder

driving drops of rain
on guitar colored leaves
wiping away stains with wind
hearing misunderstandings
and translating them to under
standing at the foot absorbing
one after another bouncing
around and losing steam
reverb hydration
giving the false room
an air of moisture.

what you need to do is listen to the the autumns, hush plain girls and feel the grass between your toes.
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Thrown
into throws
ankles twist
in the tide's winding flight
windblown smiles
bite their lips
.

la la la laaa la

i tried and couldn't do it. maybe next time. sorry. I thought if i tried real hard I could make it longer but I guess the leaves and the wind are stronger.